Four page sample. Probably too cartoony for US audience, but feck it, I like ‘em. Page four breaks the 180degree rule on the penultimate panel, so I’ll probably lightbox that bugger round the other way. (The 180 rule is one where the camera should never flip to the OTHER side of the action – cus it’ll confuse the audience/reader. Obviously, it’s a rule that can and should be broken – but only for good effect, this was more accidental – owing to the way I draw, I’ll often draw the panels in the wrong order – so sometimes odd things slip in, but I usually catch ‘em.)
Nice pages P.J! good luck with them, and I would not worry to much about them being to cartoony, as there are plenty of different styles they are using.
IIRC, She Hulk has quite cartoony artwork at the moment so I wouldn’t worry about it. Nice pages.
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