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A4 Issue Four

If you prefer you can download the pdf here.

My unending gratitude to Matt and John Yuan (deputy publishers of 1First Comics) who volunteered way back on issue 1 to proofread (off the back of a plaintive twitter plea) and ending up both being great proofreaders and even better editors - constantly encouraging and giving little notes that never alter the fabric of the story but always help.

Stories this issue:

Notifications, Memories of War, Cold Caller, The Civil War, The Monster, Sign Unseen, Ghosts.

A4 Issue Four Notes!

Gah, two stories with War in the title. So annoying. Hadn't spotted it until now, but there it is. It will be my eternal shame.

There were two things drilled in to me from English lessons in secondary school (which I did rather enjoy, I loved writing, and was told to apply for O-Levels early, so I did, and then I didn't do any work because I was fundamentally lazy - so failed it) anyway, the two things: never use the word got/gotten (I think this was my teachers personal bugbear, with teenagers writing "I got given a book then got a clip round the there and got out of there, before he got me" even I'm uncomfortable seeing the word "got" in anything I write) and never repeat a word if you can help it (obvious "I", "and" and so on are all fine). So two wars. Not good. Am annoyed. (Should point out, this is entirely a quirk of my own making!)

From hereon in there will likely be spoilers!

I had planned on a halloween all horror special - or at least as best as I'm able, but of course, I couldn't quite come up with every single story as a horror, so let's start with the least horror like story:

Notifcations

I suppose this and Ghosts share a very common through line, rejection and knowing the person who rejected you never even thinks of you. For a full exploration of this idea, watch the amazing "The Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind".

Memories of War

There's a lot going on in the world, and much of it can be traced back so far that you'll never find the beginning point (hello from Northern Ireland!) - and the question is, if everyone lost their memories would those wars still continue. (this story optimistically says we'd all stop, I have a horrible feeling we wouldn't)

Cold Caller

Phew! Lighter fair! Actually there's a different story that uses the same sort of idea (the no-hawkers caveat that many people have at their door) I've been sitting noodling as a short comic for a few years (how many? oh man, it's embarrassing to tell - but let's say I first thought of it pre-pandemic) it would be far too long to do as one of these stories, so this slightly different version of it popped in to my head.

I am pretty proud of that title though, it came late - after I'd written a bunch of the stories and I was thinking "gah, now i need a title" and ping! there it was!

I did want to do stuff that was just a smidge lighter than last issue, because I've been told some of this stuff is DARK. I think of it all in the abstract, words on paper rather than real monsters. But we're haunted by the real and the imaginary, I suppose.

The Civil War

I saw a writer (a good writer;   it'll be a good book) talking their new Zombie book and it got me thinking, that zombie stories tend to be the ultimate "yeah of course I was the assehole prepping for the end of the world, and look, I WAS RIGHT" and I thought "what if instead of it being zombies, it's that everyone was just really really nice to each other ... oh... those asseholes wouldn't change..."

The Monster

I'll be honest, andI bet readers can tell, I shoehorned frankenstien in too this (because I wanted monsters, dammit)

Here's my orginal story idea from the apple notes app:

He had fragmented himself, Pumping his entire written and audio corpus through AI Large Language Models, and created an army of bots, one for each of the balkanised social media platforms. And he was finally free. Free to get on with work.

Is it better? it might be.

Sight Unseen

This could be policitical satire, I suppose. In the hands of a better writer. Instead it's simply a piece of fiction.

Ghosts

Gotta be honest, I just loved the shape and sound of the story. I love that it works on a couple of levels.  It pretty much came out fully formed, and so short. Honestly this is the joy of these shorts, there's not an ounce of fat on the idea, there's no point trying to extend it, and there's a sort of poetic quality to it. Anyway, might be one of my favs.

 

Hope you enjoy it, I would love to know what you think - you can fire me off an email to pjholden at gmail dot com if you like!

Happy Birthday 2000ad!

Sitting here thinking about 2000ad and accidentally came up with a terror tale pitch. Sometimes I post these half hearted thoughts on twitter and I get people saying “you should have sold that as a story” and the reality is i lack time(and possibly ability) to do so. So instead I’m gonna do these half formed thoughts here where if I *do* decide to actually pitch them then I can.

so here we go:

Terror tale: Tower

a team of modern day abandoned Building spelunkers have found an enormous tower, with vast basements. As they get further and further into the basements there are ghostly apparations. Then we see another character. Tall and in shadows, beside him a shorter character with a stammer sh..sh..should we stop them? No let’s see where this goes.

the climbers discover wonders machinary not unlike the mines in forbidden planet. The ghostly things get weirder and weirder.

soemthing happens. The shadowy figure decides to intervene, but it’s too late.

the people become trapped in the machines.

short guy “th… they’re trapped”

shadowy figure “yes. I’m afraid they are. No matter. The machine will consume them and use them and when the time is right I’ll send some droids in to harvest the new thrills. It’s been a long time but Kings reach tower may yet prove useful”

and With that Tharg and a run down, almost Frankenstein-like shell of Burt-1 walk away from the long abandoned Kings Reach Tower. 

Happy birthday 2000ad

Pro Writing Debut!

yay! Suddenly, out of the blue and unbenkowst to me, my 2000ad debut as a writer is out this week, prog 2268. Once the prog hits I’ll show you the pitch and the script and the notes and then the new script (which was radically different from the old script, though the synopsis is identical.) In the meantime, here’s page 1!

February Update

So here’s what’s been happening, finally finished Soul Plumber – the six issue mini I helped out on – issue 1, pencilled 2 pages, issue 2 layed out 12 pages, issue 3 did all layouts and half the inks, issue 4 the same, issue five mostly the same and issue 6 mostly the same. All while trying to get the war book done!

There’s a few pages to be finished they’re on John – but will check in on monday and see if he needs me to help out (deadline is the 10th, so it’s doable but tight). Last couple of days I’ve inked between two-three pages a day on it – distilling super complex stuff into simple comic books (draw the Sistene chapel! the seven headed beast of the apocalypse! A crowd of thousands watch as 11 million aliens form for horses galloping across the sky…!)

Anyway, this weekend back on to the war book! I’ve forty pages to pencil and ink in the next … uhm… 28 days? (ok that’ll slip, but I’ve already pencilled the first 12)

After that a short (8 page) war think I’ve been putting of for yonks, then the second book of the v2a thing that I did last year – forty pages of post apocalyptic mad max style shennanigans. Was meant to do this last year, but you know… things got away from me.

Nothing solid planned after that, I’m gonna miss the insane workload I’ve had the past five/six months. No time to holiday, no time to do anything but work – but at the same time, I might have time to write up this second future shock/terror tale 2000ad pitch idea I’ve mostly finished (the first one sold, and I drew it just not sure when it’ll see print)

Have high hopes for some DC work though – they seemed very happy with the work I did (and I wrangled the deadline and kept the book on schedule – even as the script was running late) so it stands my best chance of a crack at the big two. I might try and take the time to send some samples to Marvel (I’ve drawn one page of marvel material, so I’m on their books, but no-one knows me from Adam over there) and I’m pretty sure Kenneth Neimand will want to do more Chimpsky (as will I)

Anyway, normalish service will resume and we’ll see how that goes. But I surely miss all the lovely money from all the extra work…

[I’ll be cross posting this to my blog but with less insider info!]

Happy Xmas Chums

Never sure if it’s too early or late to post the old xmas card – but sod it, you get to see these things early.

Looking forward to next year; got a ton of stuff in print and I’m fairly optimistic about what’s ahead [it’s to feel your career has stalled, but Soul Plumber has fairly turbo charged things a little, exposure to DC editorial has been invaluable – hoping it lands more work, but we’ll see!]

I’m still working, and likely to be working up until XMAS eve-eve, so I’m sure you’ll see more posts by me later!

CHECK IN!

Well, I’ve done as much of Soul Plumber issue 4 as I might need to do – John’s got three pages to ink and about 9 days to do it in, so hoping covid stays at bay and he can get those done, leaving me to pour myself into doing some WWII stuff

By my count today, that means I’ve drawn 13 pages of Soul Plumber (plus a further 7 pages of pencils for it) and 12 completed pages of Time Before Time, so 25 pages in 21 days. Good lord. Anyway, I need another 10 to get back on schedule…!

Check one off the checklist

Finished this earlier than I expected, but my issue of Time Before Time is now Done.

This is probably my best/favourite page. Tried to lean hard into scifi/heavy noir, so we’ll see how that looks in colour. Sometimes what I have in my head is a disappointment when I get it drawn, this page I think worked.

Release the krakens…

Or at least, release the books!

Two big announcements, one totally expeted: Lion and the Eagle Announced. Here’s some preview pages

AND THEN… Yesterday DC announnced that I was drawing issue 3 of Soul Plumber (I was helping John out from issue 1 and by issue 3 I’d ended up doing all of the layouts and about half the inks, still waiting to see what’s happening on issue 4)

DC’s announcement feels vaguely like a sea change in my career – it’s very front and centre, the headline THE TERROR CONTINUES WITH SOUL PLUMBER #3 with the subheading: Artist PJ Holden to Draw Issue #3 of DC HORROR’S Hit Series with John McCrea.

John is ok, but suffering with long covid, making work hard to do, especially the grinding work of monthly comics. I’ll be honest, John’s pages are a load better than mine (even when I’ve done the layouts John has made those pages sing) so I’ve been placated by the fact that well, I was only helping out, but finding my name in the sub heading there feels weird.

BUT – I suppose, DC comics pushing my name out in the header of press release (on the third issue of a comic) I think is them getting ahead of “why isn’t John McCrea drawing issue 3” (so making a feature out of a bug) but also I think it suggests my profile has raised a bit.

Anyway here’s some pages from this:

Soul Plumber is absolutely bonkers. 

Dracula

Wow, people liked this dracula image. So it’s gonna be the cover for my October Monster Sketchbook I’m putting together.

Been a mad month October, by my count I’ve done 18 pages pencils and inks, a further 15 pages of pencils and 19 pages of layouts/pencils (though really, they’re pretty much layouts) which means (if you add the pencils to the inks, that’s 18+15 = 33 completed pages, plus 4 layouts, plus a sketch every single day. Mental.

I’ve had to take on a fair amount of the work on Soul Plumber, while John recovers from covid, wasn’t the plan but we are were we are. I think in a few days by big War thing with Garth will be announced, I’ve STILL 60 pages of that to go – terrifying. Plus 12 pages of time before time to do this month. Mental.

Anyway. Enjoy dracula.

The Daily Grind

Like an idiot, after doing some one per day sketches this month – and one page per week in 2019, I thought, could I do a daily comic like this?

I mean, the answer is a very clear and obvious no.

But … if I COULD do a comic like this, what form would it take.

I mean, I’ve flirted with the idea – dozens of times – of doing a digest sized commando comic (because I THINK I could draw on page per day of that quite easily – and when  I say one page per day, I REALLY mean one page in an hour  – a morning sketch).

In theory I *could* draw that, but reading scripts is a bit of a pain and I wouldn’t want to work with someone for fear of cocking it up or choking and picking a thing up and doing it weekly is harder than it looks, but a daily strip…? would it be easier or harder. Probably harder… but maybe easier ? I’m not sure.

Anyway. I need to write something myself, and I’d need to draw it myself. That’s a given. So it isn’t going to happen.

Even if I did accidentally come up with an idea and plot out a story. Which, you know, I could write out as a bunch of one line bullet points, which I could use as the basis for jazz drawing a comic page per day. I mean I could do that, but won’t. (I mean, I have written out the first nine bullet points, which are the first nine pages).

I’d like to have a finished book at the end of one month, but it’s more likely, if it were to happen, that it’d be a book after two months, because around 50-60 pages feels better as a read at that size.

But I’m not doing it.

No matter how tempted.

(Oh god, I might do it)

I told Thomas(13) the plot and he very succinctly put me in my place again by saying “yes, but are you going to do it?” the last time he did that to me I ended up pitching, writing and selling a story to 2000ad.

So I dunno. I think I want to do this. Taking a week holiday this week (which means I’ll be working, but in a different location) and maybe will think about it a little more.