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A4 Issue Four

If you prefer you can download the pdf here.

My unending gratitude to Matt and John Yuan (deputy publishers of 1First Comics) who volunteered way back on issue 1 to proofread (off the back of a plaintive twitter plea) and ending up both being great proofreaders and even better editors - constantly encouraging and giving little notes that never alter the fabric of the story but always help.

Stories this issue:

Notifications, Memories of War, Cold Caller, The Civil War, The Monster, Sign Unseen, Ghosts.

A4 Issue Four Notes!

Gah, two stories with War in the title. So annoying. Hadn't spotted it until now, but there it is. It will be my eternal shame.

There were two things drilled in to me from English lessons in secondary school (which I did rather enjoy, I loved writing, and was told to apply for O-Levels early, so I did, and then I didn't do any work because I was fundamentally lazy - so failed it) anyway, the two things: never use the word got/gotten (I think this was my teachers personal bugbear, with teenagers writing "I got given a book then got a clip round the there and got out of there, before he got me" even I'm uncomfortable seeing the word "got" in anything I write) and never repeat a word if you can help it (obvious "I", "and" and so on are all fine). So two wars. Not good. Am annoyed. (Should point out, this is entirely a quirk of my own making!)

From hereon in there will likely be spoilers!

I had planned on a halloween all horror special - or at least as best as I'm able, but of course, I couldn't quite come up with every single story as a horror, so let's start with the least horror like story:

Notifcations

I suppose this and Ghosts share a very common through line, rejection and knowing the person who rejected you never even thinks of you. For a full exploration of this idea, watch the amazing "The Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind".

Memories of War

There's a lot going on in the world, and much of it can be traced back so far that you'll never find the beginning point (hello from Northern Ireland!) - and the question is, if everyone lost their memories would those wars still continue. (this story optimistically says we'd all stop, I have a horrible feeling we wouldn't)

Cold Caller

Phew! Lighter fair! Actually there's a different story that uses the same sort of idea (the no-hawkers caveat that many people have at their door) I've been sitting noodling as a short comic for a few years (how many? oh man, it's embarrassing to tell - but let's say I first thought of it pre-pandemic) it would be far too long to do as one of these stories, so this slightly different version of it popped in to my head.

I am pretty proud of that title though, it came late - after I'd written a bunch of the stories and I was thinking "gah, now i need a title" and ping! there it was!

I did want to do stuff that was just a smidge lighter than last issue, because I've been told some of this stuff is DARK. I think of it all in the abstract, words on paper rather than real monsters. But we're haunted by the real and the imaginary, I suppose.

The Civil War

I saw a writer (a good writer;   it'll be a good book) talking their new Zombie book and it got me thinking, that zombie stories tend to be the ultimate "yeah of course I was the assehole prepping for the end of the world, and look, I WAS RIGHT" and I thought "what if instead of it being zombies, it's that everyone was just really really nice to each other ... oh... those asseholes wouldn't change..."

The Monster

I'll be honest, andI bet readers can tell, I shoehorned frankenstien in too this (because I wanted monsters, dammit)

Here's my orginal story idea from the apple notes app:

He had fragmented himself, Pumping his entire written and audio corpus through AI Large Language Models, and created an army of bots, one for each of the balkanised social media platforms. And he was finally free. Free to get on with work.

Is it better? it might be.

Sight Unseen

This could be policitical satire, I suppose. In the hands of a better writer. Instead it's simply a piece of fiction.

Ghosts

Gotta be honest, I just loved the shape and sound of the story. I love that it works on a couple of levels.  It pretty much came out fully formed, and so short. Honestly this is the joy of these shorts, there's not an ounce of fat on the idea, there's no point trying to extend it, and there's a sort of poetic quality to it. Anyway, might be one of my favs.

 

Hope you enjoy it, I would love to know what you think - you can fire me off an email to pjholden at gmail dot com if you like!

Current working methods

If you’re a reader of my old blog, you’ll have read periodic updates on how I work – primarily because like me in a party, the moment I feel like I’m comfortable I have to upended a table and jump out a window (or find a tiny kitchen corner to hide in).

The current process goes like this:

Read script.

Create a multi page document of the length of the script + a few pages at the back for layouts/designs.

Use a page at the back, creating a page frame (a specific layer in clip studio paint) and divide it so it’s exactly nine frames, which I’ll use as my guideline for thumbs.

Digital thumbs, I find drawn this way are actually more detailed than my normal pencilled thumbs, and can sometimes double as pencils.

Happy with thumbs, I’ll cut the thumb out for the first page, then paste that into the first document, scaling it up to fill the page.

I’ll create a “pencils” folder (setting it to draft – again a Clip Studio Paint specific thing) and make it a pale blue colour, dropping the enlarged thumb in. I’ll create a new pencil layer within that folder, and trace/finish the rough thumbs into useable pencils.

Once I’ve got my pencils, I’ll create an inks layer, and just ink the damn thing.

That’s it.

I’ve a couple of rules of thumbs for making the digital work go smoother, but you’ll have to be a backstage patreon for that!


Drawing table update

Sometimes I get a big chunk of a page done on one day, but don’t count it as a finished page, then count it the next day when finished. On that basis, I finished two pages today and, I think, two yesterday? Can’t remember. Sometimes you work so fast you lose track.

Luckily it’s all digital so I don’t have to keep piles of paper beside me. (That’s a nightmare, three pages a day of paper printout, sounds great but try managing all those sheets of paper coming off your drawing board like you’re a printer with the output tray disconnected)

Anyway here’s a dredd head I’m happy with (Dredd in winter gear)

I’ve never drawn this many Dredd’s in one strip before. It’s funny how your strength can suddenly become a weakness – I had a great dredd chin down pat, but suddenly I’ve got to draw lots of Dredd’s and you’re desperate not to repeat the same old face/expression.


Dredd

Behind the scenes, I explain what’s going on with this scaffolding I’ve drawn all over Dredd’s face, but here’s the picture for everyone else!

Bloody Helmet

Look, I’ve drawn the world’s angriest lawman professionally for coming up on 16 years (and a stint as an enthusiastic amateur for the best part of all my life up until then) and I still haven’t figured him out.

This Dredd head (Dredd is in a winter outfit, so it’s a little different to his normal gear) looks ok, probably – perspective on faces/heads is tricky since we’re not perfectly square shapes (well, my head is, but your’s probably isn’t).

If you haven’t spotted what’s desperatly wrong with this pic – it’s Dredd’s helmet (and the bit of neck that’s missing, but we’ll ignore that)

But drawing a very simple perspective cube over/ around the head though, we can get find points which should match up (without trying to plot the entire shape in perspective) and these points can then help us correct the shot – I’ve drawn a rough perspective cube in red, with guidelines, and put little blue arrows where I think the corrections need to go.

I pick points on the helmet that I think SHOULD line up and then fix the drawing to do so.

Looking at the blue arrows on the bottom (left and right) it should be very obvious that the bottom of Dredd’s helmet doesn’t match, in effect making the right side of his helmet look longer than the other side.

The blue arrows at the top (again on left and right) should match up where the eye slots are, but again, should be obvious here they just don’t.

(You can see this is a really rough perspective grid though, so I’m not overly fussed on 100% accuracy, just a rough “looks about right” which is far easier)

But editing the drawing and making these things match up, we get this…

We’ve used those little blue arrows to help us place the features of the helmet so the line up in perspective.

Without the grid…

It’s a subtle thing, but I think this is a better dredd (oh, I added that bit of neck)

No… to erase this dredd forever since I didn’t draw him quite angry enough for the script… bugger.



On the drawing board today…

Two pages completed today.

WIP on Dredd…(following the post on reflections, I got this in to a panel that I’m pleased with)

And did a second page today, can’t speak about it – it’s a pitch, so it’ll be long time before it’s firm enough to speak off, but you can see this…

Kids back at school, wife at work. Got plenty done. Still doesn’t seem like enough though.

(These pages are entirely digital)

WIP Dredd

Spoiler free, look at those idiotic tanks.

Pencilled and inked a page today, of which this is a part – hot off the digital tablet.

Even at two pages per day this month I may not catch up on everything I have to do.

Ancient Batman Sample

So it was 25 years ago yesterday since the Batman animated adventures debuted.

I’m unsure of how old this (unsolicited) batman sample is, but it’s at least half that.

Even as I did these pencils I was aware they were far tighter than my usual. Now they just look insanely tight.

(five vertical panels? I bet I thought I was the bees knees, but it’s largely unreadable – also, why put batman’s ears on top of black, I should’ve made the bg at the top lighter. And … Bruce Timm much? actually no, not even a fraction of Bruce Timm, but look at that bored Commissionor Gordon/security guard.)


This page has nothing going for it. NOTHING.


I was pretty pleased with the Bat-goggles, and I still like the chunky batman on panel 2 though that big dildo-like building is fairly distracting.

(and I clearly used up all the perspective grid on that first page, cus here it’s all Aldus Huxley doors of perception perspective…)


Mini interview

I was asked in Feb to do a little interview for a student. Here’s that…


As a parent who is working professionally within the comics industry, do you encourage your kids to read comics, and why?

I think I’d always encourage my kids to read, regardless of what it is they’re reading. I like comics, and comics got me through a tough time as a reader, but my kids don’t seem to have picked up that deep love I had for them and treat comics as just another way to entertain themselves when they’ve been told they’ve got to come off youtube.

Given the current state of the industry, do you think young readers are catered to enough? Does the industry put enough emphasis on younger readers? Is there anything you think the industry could do,
from a publisher or retail level even, that would help open the door for kids into comics? Or is there anything that they are doing at 

the moment that you think is encouraging?

Price I think is the big issue. There’s plenty of kids comics on shelves in the newsagents and supermarkets (in fact more than at any time I remember) but they’re expensive especially compared to the hours of entertainment that can be had from video games, and it would be nice if all comics shops had a section that matched the Big Bang’s shelves for kid friendly fare.


What is your opinion on the all-ages books that are currently available? A common phrase used in comics retail, when suggesting comics for a new adult/teenage customer, is that there is a comic out
there for everyone, do you think this statement applies to younger readers or do you think more publishers should be focusing on the all-ages market?

I wish I could speak with some authority here, but I can’t. My experience is limited to my experience, and I have a tendency (like most parents) to try and impose my tastes on my kids, I want them to read 2000AD – I’d LOVE a younger age version of 2000AD – but they love pokemon and are pretty well served on that front.


What do you think kids could learn or what could benefit them from reading comics at a young age?

There’s an enormous amount of benefits to reading comics, I think – and many not so obvious. Expanding a child’s vocabulary seems pretty obvious but I think it broadens your thinking and helps you understand new more complex subjects sooner. Granted that’s often a little backfiring (I mean, it’s great my kids know what radioactive means, but it’s less great that they think it means it can grant them the powers of any animal that is radioactive as long as it bites them). It’s also amazing way to expand a child’s empathy, and can teach them social situations and how to react, again, comics being comics, there’s a hyperbolic nature to these things, but the little moments grounded in real life can help kids deal with knowing right from wrong, and knowing what side society they really want to belong to.

Story telling in reflection

Tom King on twitter just posted this gorgeous page… The story telling is great here (though you’re coming in to the middle of the story so it’s not immediatly apparent that the the two voices are from one person – Two-Face

Art by CLAY MANN (not a batman villain) Seth T Mann (possibly related?) and Jordie Bellaire (the fresh princess)

Unscripted was the sequence where the bridge is reflected, it’s a beautiful composition, and it really works for both the story telling and the character. You can wait years to get a chance to pull off a cool looking story telling trick that is not just attractive but actually makes sense for the story.

No, the lettering (not sure who lettered it) is equally great, but it throws up one of the great conundrums of lettering… which is…

Speech doesn’t come from reflections.

It works here though, because, I suppose, Harvey’s evil side is a reflection and the illusion isn’t broken, partly because the speech is coming from a human reflected on a surface and there are no other humans in the panel. If you included, say, someone stood on the embankment watching it, the speech would suddenly seem weird – how’s it coming from there? (You’d think).

I only flagged it up because it’s interesting, and it’s interesting to see it done right (as here) as it is to see it done wrong – I drew a strip where, thinking I’d be super clever) I had two characters talking, with the characters drawn as reflections on the back of Dredd’s helmet.

I hadn’t taken in to account where the dialogue was coming from.

In this instance, the best location might have been if the dialogue had appeared coming from off panel with the characters reflections just being on the helmet.

As it was, the letterer had the dialogue coming off the reflections making it look a little like Dredd was talking to himself.

Can’t put my hands on the original art, so here’s a little simulation … 

(I’d note, if you have a specific intent in mind as an artist, probably best to let your editor and letterer in on it!)



Anyway, something to … REFLECT ON! hashtag dadjoke hashtag still got it.

Just say no…

The freelancers curse is never being able to say ‘No’.

No means you’re turning away work. (Who would do that?)

No means someone else will do the work and you’ll find out and you’ll hate them a bit for it. (and hate yourself in turn)

No means when the inevitable lull in work comes around and you’re sitting twiddling your thumbs and you remember that work you said no to you’ll think Ah jaysus. (And the money! THE MONEY!)

But yes.

Saying yes when you’re busy means you can’t give the time you need to do good work.

Saying yes when you’re exhausted means you can’t find it in you to do the best work.

Saying yes when you’re already overloaded means you’re more than likely to let at least one person down. Maybe two. Maybe three.

Sometimes the smart thing to do is to say no.